Slay Your Darlings | Sally Naylor
Slay Your Darlings | Sally Naylor
Two girls, see, Deborah and Cara, too far
apart to meld words, so their poem lips are
bifurcated, which in poetry is
enjambment, clamor for a new critique group,
from a tri-county of poets, grab Lori and Paul
from another cluster, Meryl and Linda from
the worded winds of teaching and editing,
Gary the Prof (Barbra's too busy), Stephen who is
someone's relative, eight to start, who would seldom
be unanimous about anything, except smiles
of respect for words that dance, measures of rhythms,
inner lives exposed in hieroglyphs of poem.
Even their name, No Names, was voted upon (4-4 and a coin toss)
when no other title would do, nothing god forbid geographic,
nor similar to anything else, nor words already
spoken. So we called ourselves No Names and until this anthology
haven't used the title since. For what? We are
who we are. Plus additions, Lenny a page of Florida
poetry history, Sally and Margie who we discovered
in poetry workshops, Barbra the prof
who finally retired and has time. We meet. We
critique. If four of us agree that a line
should be deleted, at least one of us will feel
those words are the most important line in the poem.
A blithe balance. Then we go to dinner. To a
nameless place at least two of us don't like.
To the reader go our roils. Enjoy.
Sept 12, 2009 plus seven orbits around the sun…